[docs] xmldocs - docelic modified guides/iccattut.xml

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User:      docelic
Date:      2004-08-06 10:44:44 GMT
Modified:  guides   iccattut.xml
Log:
Improved the tutorial introduction text.

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 	<sect2 id='Introduction'>
 		<title>Introduction</title>
 		<para>
-		The simple catalog you will create during tutorial should give you a feel of the basic Interchange system. It should also be considered a stepping stone to a more complete and functional Interchange-enabled website. The tutorial will rely as much as possible on default settings to accentuate ideas instead of implementation. It will use as few of Interchange's capabilities as possible, while still building a usable store. The resulting site will be simple but usable. The value of this tutorial is in the <emphasis>ready to use</emphasis> instructions and explanations you'll pick along the way.
+		Welcome to the Interchange Catalog Building Tutorial. Interchange originally started as an electronic cart and database display system, but over time it developed into a general application server.
+		</para> <para>
+		The simple Interchange <firstterm>catalog</firstterm> you will create during this tutorial should give you a feel of the basic Interchange system. It should also be considered a stepping stone to a more complete and functional Interchange-enabled website. The tutorial will rely as much as possible on default settings to accentuate ideas instead of implementation. It will use as few of Interchange's capabilities as possible, while still building a usable website (an online store in our example). <emphasis>The resulting site will be simple but usable</emphasis>. The value of this tutorial is in the explanations of the general Interchange ideas and small <emphasis>ready to use</emphasis> examples to get you up to speed.
 		</para> <para>
 		It is recommended that you create the files used in this tutorial yourself. You will learn more by creating the directory structure and using your favorite text editor to create files in the proper places on your own system as they are discussed.
 		</para> <para>